I have a brain that likes things logical, nicely ordered and in line. You follow the rules, you get the result. I can’t get my head around the order of shots, stories and putting it all together.
Once a week we go to the grandparents house for dinner. We have a niece and nephew, 4 and 1 respectively, that come over as well. It is a good time had by all and I want to capture the moments as they learn and grow. I just can’t figure out what the story is. I get that I should take short shots of what’s happening but when you put them all together, will it make sense?
I’m pretty sure I am just overthinking it, and should maybe just try it.
Yes, you are and you should. But to help you, let me give you a feather to hold in your trunk– oops, I mean a rule you can follow to improve your videos.
Story is a magical organizing force that pulls your video together and makes it more watchable. And you don’t have to do any writing or heavy thinking in advance to make it work. Because magical. Here’s your rule: next dinner, pick the first idea that comes to you and focus on that.
What’s interesting about, say, your nephew? For example, suppose you notice that, being 1, he’s learning his first words. “Baby talks.” Noun/verb. Bang! First thing! That’s your story.
Now shoot short shots of baby playing with language. At some point, as people interact with baby, something interesting will happen. Suppose you see Grandpa showing him how to say “fork” and handing him a kids fork. Baby puts it in his ear. Grandpa repeats the word. Baby tries to say it, instead uttering a familiar Anglo-Saxon epithet. Everyone laughs. Baby repeats epithet over and over, then throws food on floor. Grandpa makes a bad “Meet the Forkers” joke. End of story.
The magical rule has given you an observational focus. Grandpa trying to teach baby to talk. By becoming intensely interested in shooting everything about it, you magically find a story. When this story is done (and it’s done when it feels done or starts to bore you) repeat the observation step and pick another story. Now shoot that one.
At the end of the dinner you will have a camera full of little stories. If you like to edit, cut the ones that don’t work so well. You can package the best ones into standalone bites from vine-length up, depending on how long they stay interesting. Or edit all of them into a video called (okay, this is not my most inventive title ever) “Dinner at the Grandparents’ House.” When you do, you will be surprised to find that these short and interesting stories fit together in some bigger and very watchable way.
To review the Rule* for Story as an Organizing Force:
- If you’re having trouble finding story, go with the first thing that you notice
- Become intensely interested in it and
- Shoot it until it feels over or you get bored
- Cut the bad stuff.
*Please don’t email about “rules” in video. Been there, done that. Remember this is just a feather for Bryan. For you, when it says “rule” please read “exercise.”